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PostSubject: Steve Ballz   Mon Jan 16, 2012 7:00 pm

Name: Steve Ballz

Gender: Male

Age:10

Birthplace: Accumula town, Unova

Rank: New trainer Looks: Suspect Height: 3"3
Weight: 7 Stone, 8 Pounds 9oz
Battle Style: Steve Uses the inner power of his pokemon to win battles. Personality: Steve was bossy when he was 6. But ever since he got rufflet, he knew the rights and wrongs of evrything. but he was grumpy when got out of bed that first morning.
History: Steve grew up in the rural streets of Sandgem Town. But then, his parents moved to unova to let him become a pokemon trainer. His dad rented flats for accomodation, whilist his mother was glued to the telly watching video tapes. Steve never knew this but his dad was the elite 4, and snuck out when he was on his journey
Pokemon History: Steve found an old pokeball in a river and sent it out. Rufflet was Very servere when he sent her out but now they are best friends. Items: 5 Pokeballs (Do not change)

Badges: 0 (Do not change)

Ribbons: 0 (Do not change)

Money: 15,000$ (Do not change)


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Level: 5 Name: Rufflet Nickname: Roughlet Gender:FemaleMoves: Wing attack,Sandattack Ability: Keen Eye Exp.: 0 (Leave as 0)
Personality: Laughing Funny


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PostSubject: Re: Steve Ballz   Mon Jan 16, 2012 7:28 pm

It seems good just a few things. You need to describe his battle style a little more. Also he should probably be from the pokemon world instead of the UK. Fix those things And you should be ok.
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PostSubject: Re: Steve Ballz   Mon Jan 16, 2012 7:43 pm

3' 3"?????

And Eveekitten is right you need more details.
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PostSubject: Re: Steve Ballz   Mon Jan 16, 2012 10:50 pm

I was wondering about height myself, but hey to each their own >.>
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PostSubject: Re: Steve Ballz   Tue Jan 17, 2012 2:30 am

And he's 7 stone xD 7 stone 3'3" 10 year old? Someone's been eating too many McDonalds xD
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PostSubject: Re: Steve Ballz   Tue Jan 17, 2012 5:53 am

Nah, I think it's too much burger kings.. XDD Anyway's I'ma edit now.
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PostSubject: Re: Steve Ballz   Tue Jan 17, 2012 5:56 am

Is it ready now? Laughing
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PostSubject: Re: Steve Ballz   Tue Jan 17, 2012 6:34 am

Personality and history need to be a lot longer. For looks you can't just use a smile, a forty word paragraph or an actuall picture.
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PostSubject: Re: Steve Ballz   Thu Jan 19, 2012 10:25 am

you still need to elaborate on battle style too. How does your character use your pokemon in battle, etc.
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PostSubject: Re: Steve Ballz   Thu Jan 19, 2012 6:10 pm

Could I leave this for the weekend? I've got school...
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PostSubject: Re: Steve Ballz   Thu Jan 19, 2012 11:14 pm

Take your time no rush
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